For the Sake of Story

Back in November for NaNoWriMo, I put together a sequel for SHADE. (And I won myself a discount on Scrivener. Holla!)

Anyway, I had used most of October to meticulously plan out the novel which is what made it really easy for me to write. Once I have my idea outlined, it’s more or less a paint-by-number, though I do leave room for my muse to take me in other directions should it choose.

December came and looking over my nice little rough draft I realized something that I would fight against for months. Book 2 seemed more and more to be me trying to cram two books worth of story into one.


But the plot twists!

Another murky middle to deal with?

Splitting a book in half is too hard!

But then all those other moments get pushed to Book 3!

Can I really make this split work?

What about the children? Is anyone thinking of the children for goodness’s sake?

Thankfully, I’ve faced these hard moments before. When it came to Book 1, after a writing conference in New York I knew I had to make substantial changes, not unlike the changes I’m probably going to make now.


For some of you rewrites are not any kind of problem. It may be your curse. But for some of you the idea of having to majorly revamp your book scares you like Reevers scare Captain Mal.

For the sake of story, suck it up, and do it anyway.

How do you know if you need to revamp the story? The easiest way to find out is beta readers. And some of the best ways to find beta readers is going to writer’s conferences and networking. Your fellow writers will appreciate a beta read themselves, so offer to exchange chapters or even full novels, get feedback and see what’s working and what isn’t.

Another way is right here on the WordPress community. We’ve got some of the best people on here who have loads of experience who can help.

Hopefully it doesn’t come as news to you that golden ink doesn’t drip from your penβ€”or keyboard. Think of it as getting the translation of the story in your head right. I’ve often noticed while some things in my stories change substantially, the essence tends to remain the same.

And I’ve probably said this before, but revamping or splitting books can often bring about creative discoveries you might not have stumbled upon otherwise. I created a character from a book split I doubt would have come to me any other wayβ€”and he’s one of my faves.

If you really want a story that’s going to be significantly impactful to your readers, it’s going to take some work, and often that work will be uncomfortable and hard. But you owe it to your readers and to your craft to present only the best possible.

It is my own personal goal to make every book I write better than the previous. My hope is that my skill will continue to grow and be illustrated in my writing as it goes forward.

What do you do for the sake of story? Have you had to make substantial edits or changes to a book that you didn’t want to make at first? What are your personal goals for your craft?

10 thoughts on “For the Sake of Story

  1. Also a pretty good idea is getting some people from your target audience to read it. Which mostly likely will be family (if they are willing, lol). Especially if you’re targeting a younger audience. (After all, think of the children πŸ˜‰ ).

    Hmm, I removed a complete scene before. I kept cutting it down until finally I just removed it all together. It really wasn’t that important to the overall story. I really liked that scene too. Oh well. πŸ™‚

  2. The children! lol Just tell ’em Purple Monkey Dishwasher. Also Reeeveers. xD
    I’m hunting for a new Beta at the moment, actually. Need to scour the Absolute Write forums. πŸ˜›

  3. I finally used a beta reader for this, the draft of my fourth book. It’s been absolutely worth it and the emerging final document is way tighter and better without having lost anything of value.

  4. You make revamps sound easy … fun even. Oh but I had to rewrite! I get stuck there all the time, but I know we gotta do what we gotta do.

    Good luck. It’s exciting you’ll end up with a trilogy when your through. πŸ™‚

    • The story is already longer. We’ll see if people are cool with more than a trilogy… πŸ˜‰ rewrites are tough, despite their fantastic benefits. I’m right there with you.

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